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Geschrieben von Linta am 25.10.2006 um 02:40:

  Remained

And the Scars remained on his legs
Everytime he cutted them
And the wound in his Heart
stopped to bleed for a few hours
Everytime he touched his scarred skin
And the pits on his Arms
He was fellin' some thing
between grandiose and severe
And the Creases on his small Body
blazed his transparent unbodieness
But when the Blood flowed warm
when it streamed ardent
He had laughed again
And the Scars remained on his Shoulders
Where he carried the
Girl of his Fears and his endless Love
Everytime
And when he made love with her
When he fucked her
After hours
He dropped down dead
For a few days
And the Scars reminds him everytime


Grammatikkalisch arg falsch. Ich weiß.

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Geschrieben von Erbeere am 25.10.2006 um 18:02:

 

kurze frage,warum stellst du es dann hier rein?

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Geschrieben von Linta am 26.10.2006 um 01:17:

 

Kurze Antwort: Weil ich zu dumm bin, um's selbst zu verbessern.