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Geschrieben von HafiGirl am 16.09.2005 um 15:01:
Broken hearts
[U]Broken hearts[U]
She sits on her chair and looks around...why nobody wants to help her?
Her heat is broken!
He sits on his bed and crys...why nobody wants to help him?
His heart is broken!
They go alone alonge the road...they don't want to see somebody.
But there! She runs to him, he runs to her; broken hearts together!
Uuuuunnnddd?? wie gefällt's??
Geschrieben von Sunnyglade am 16.09.2005 um 15:37:
RE: Broken hearts
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Original von HafiGirl
[U]Broken hearts[U]
She sits on her chair and looks around...why nobody wants to help her?
Her heart is broken!
He sits on his bed and crys...why nobody wants to help him?
His heart is broken!
They go alone a longe the road...they don't want to see somebody.
But there! She runs to him, he runs to her; broken hearts together!
Uuuuunnnddd?? wie gefällt's?? |
Gefällt mir aber sonst gut.
Geschrieben von Vally am 16.09.2005 um 18:05:
Dein Englisch ist noch nicht sooo gut. Noch nicht gut genung für Gedichte, sagen wir mal so.
Mal ein bissal zitiert:
She sits on her chair and looks around...why does nobody wants to help her?
Her heart is broken!
He sits on his bed and crys [cries]...why does nobody wants to help him?
His heart is broken!
They go alone alonge the road...they don't want to see somebody [someone fände ich hier besser].
But there! She runs to him, he runs to her; broken hearts are(?) together!
Lg, Vally
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