Geschrieben von Joko am 11.09.2009 um 17:28:
My question
My question
Please say yes or no,
and answer my question.
I ask you today,
about this topic.
But you say nothing,
for that, precise for that,
I hate you so much.
When you can give me an answer,
and when you can understand me?
When you can hear my heart,
it's beat so loudly and sad.
Why can't you see me all the day,
and why can't you kiss my lips?
Because I'm shy or I'm a girl,
because I'm too large or too small?
Give me an answer it's necessary,
please give it me once
and once again.
Kommentar
Ich habe bei diesem Gedicht keinen Wert auf Reime gelegt, sondern legidlich einige Gedanken und Gefühle die in meinem Kopf herum schwirrten aufzuschreiben.
Ich würde mich sehr über Kommentare von euch freuen.
