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 Englis Story l Fehler gesucht (Grammatik) |
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Dabei seit: 14.06.2005
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Why the Ostriches don´t have a king
It was a nice sunny day in Ostriche Town. There were a lot of ostriches, because there was a popular ostrich race with Lionel McOstrichy, the king of ostriches.
He was so famous, because he was the fastest of ostriches in Ostriche Town. He was very popular and had a lot of friends, because he was the fastest runner!
So he won this race, too however he didn´t feel happy and wanted to be special, but all ostriches said:
“That was really brilliant!”
But Lionel felt miserable and on a day tried to fly like a little budgie, so he jumped up and down and he moved his wings, but he couldn´t fly. He got very nervous and felt silly, but he didn´t want to give up.
A week later he climed up on a tree and tied a big rope round his foots and the tree. He wanted to play a trick… He jumped down the big tree and fell down on the dirty grass, because it was simply too heavy and the rope wasn´t strongly enough for Lionel.
The other saw ostriches saw the mistake and laughed to Lionel, because he looked so silly.
A lot of ostriches felt angry with him. So all ostriches said: “We don´t want to have a stupid king!” or “You are so silly Lionel – you are a stupid king!”
Lionel felt very unhappy and miserable, because he didn´t want to be so silly.
“I´m stupid… I can´t be the king of Ostriche Town…”, he wishpered. From that moment on he wanted to be normal. He didn´t want to be a king or special, he wanted to be a normally ostriche with friends and family.
Hasaufgabe für Englisch ^^
Kann jemand Fehler oder so finden??
Und wie ist so mein Schreibstil auf Englisch? Mach ich viele Fehler, verwende ich Konnektivs und schreibe ich immer im Past Tense?
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